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Dreaming of Glaumora by CommanderEVE

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The image is quite extravagant and beautiful... The colors all mix quite well... One issue I have when looking at this is that it seems too bland in the angle... If you change the angling it will look even better... one of the best things about this image is the specks in the light... another quite good thing is the shading on the feathers... The dark surrounding it puts a great amount of focus on the owl and the specks that are illuminated in the light... I absolutely would love this image though if you would change the angles of the owl and light... :iconcommandereve:...love your profile pic btw
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CommanderEVE Nov 28, 2012  Student Photographer
Yeah, I know what you mean about the angle, I feel the same, it feels a bit awkward as if I am waiting for Eve to turn her head. So do you think I should have drawn some of the other side of her face?

Also thank you for the compliment on my profile photograph and on the critique. ;)
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soranetame Nov 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Lol... mabye have it show part of the beak... that would be nice... the light would add the the contrast...
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CommanderEVE Nov 28, 2012  Student Photographer
Yeah, as I painted it got more and more hidden. Barn owls beaks are meant to be mostly hidden by the feathers, but not like that.
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soranetame Nov 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah... I know what you mean... it is a nice peice though...
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